New Poem

[kyra_ojosverdes]

"Tuesday Afternoon"
We were a love song of hands. His
body damp with sweat, a hint of ocean.
Ragged wind that did not cool us, small tremors
in the steady tempo of desire. I savored each
exquisite detail, each pulse of the thickening
heat. Then came the earthquake, the wave,
an explosion of stars in the sun's white glare.
I was the sky, that day. In my mouth
I held the ocean.

-- 20 June, 2003

Comments

wow!

[mindscat.livejournal.com]

that is fabulous! so vivid.

Re: wow!

[kyra-ojosverdes.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the comment!! :-)

oh, hey...

[mindscat.livejournal.com]

check my main journal page. i stuck a link to your deviantart there :D.

Re: oh, hey...

[kyra-ojosverdes.livejournal.com]

Awesome!! Thanks!

[redrita.livejournal.com]

The first time I read this, I thought you were talking about a woman! Dammit, your sexual urges are too difficult to keep track of.

Other than that, excellent imagery. Very erotic.